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July 12, 2007

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gautami

"Now the proximity is in my life.
Things are too close, and blurred,
and I stumble through the mess of tangled umbrage."

I enjoyed reading your post. Welcome to SS and do keep posting.

Ryan Sharp

Brilliant man. Look forward to more.

russ

bravo

Reagan Pugh

Shauno,

unzipping frustration, wild clarity, tangled umbrage.

Simply lovely. Well done sir.

Richard Carpenter

Upon reading this little gem, I felt proud to know you. What a hilarious and vivid moment! Well done, love the church bell ringing and unzipping frustration. that is poetry my friend.

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